Tristan and Eric's Creative Writing Learning Story

Learners: Tristan & Eric    Learning Coach: T.Dillner           Date: 13.10.15

Learning Area: Literacy - Creative Writing

Learning Observed and Vision Principles

In Term 4, I am working with the Yoyos on a Tuesday specifically for Literacy. Today was our first session together and we started with a story called “Badjelly the Witch” by Spike Milligan. This was the inspiration for our Creative Writing - “Our Potion” - which encouraged them to show curiosity. The learners had to name their potion, explain what powers it gave people, write a set of make believe ingredients and describe which ingredient was the most important to have. Tristan and Eric chose to name theirs ‘Invisibility’ which can make people invisible. They had a whole range of creative ingredients including gold money, mango, frozen coke and clay to name a few. Collaboratively, they decided that the most important ingredient to include was apples because they would make the potion healthy. Tristan and Eric were capable of following every instruction, completing the task unassisted and handing it in before time was up. I was very impressed to see this!

Evidence of learning

Next Learning Steps

Next Tuesday the Yoyos group will be writing a set of instructions to tell the reader which order they need to add the ingredients to the potion and how long to boil it for. Think about how the name of the Potion could be more creative or exciting. Edit or change the ingredients to suit the feedback questions I have left on the bottom of the page.