Tristan and Eric's Creative Writing Learning Story

Learners: Tristan & Eric    Learning Coach: T.Dillner           Date: 13.10.15

Learning Area: Literacy - Creative Writing

Learning Observed and Vision Principles

In Term 4, I am working with the Yoyos on a Tuesday specifically for Literacy. Today was our first session together and we started with a story called “Badjelly the Witch” by Spike Milligan. This was the inspiration for our Creative Writing - “Our Potion” - which encouraged them to show curiosity. The learners had to name their potion, explain what powers it gave people, write a set of make believe ingredients and describe which ingredient was the most important to have. Tristan and Eric chose to name theirs ‘Invisibility’ which can make people invisible. They had a whole range of creative ingredients including gold money, mango, frozen coke and clay to name a few. Collaboratively, they decided that the most important ingredient to include was apples because they would make the potion healthy. Tristan and Eric were capable of following every instruction, completing the task unassisted and handing it in before time was up. I was very impressed to see this!

Evidence of learning

Next Learning Steps

Next Tuesday the Yoyos group will be writing a set of instructions to tell the reader which order they need to add the ingredients to the potion and how long to boil it for. Think about how the name of the Potion could be more creative or exciting. Edit or change the ingredients to suit the feedback questions I have left on the bottom of the page.

iExplore Narrative Assessment

Learner: Tristan                                                      Date: September 2015

Learning Area: iExplore                                     Learning Coach: John Dyer

Learning Observed

During Term 3, Tristan and his learning group have been finding out about a variety of things that interests them. We have been identifying which of our Vision Principles are best used to make the iExplore a success. Tristan has been learning to breakdown his iExplore projects into manageable steps beginning with a brainstorm of ideas, then identifying ‘What’ the iExplore will eventually look like before following a step by step plan that brings the iExplore to life. Tristan has been focussing her recent learning on making a Top Trump Card while also spending time time producing a WW1 project which he shared with his group.

Evidence of Learning Here is a link to Tristan’s Minecraft Club iExplore

Key Competencies/Vision Principles being demonstrated

Thinking - Making sense of information, experiences and ideas. Using language, symbols, and texts - Making sense of words, numbers and images. Managing self - knowing when to lead, when to follow and when to act independently. Relating to others - Interacting effectively in a range of contexts. Participating and contributing - Being actively involved in school and the community Curious Collaborative Connected Capable

Next Learning Steps

Once the iExplore learning process has been learned by Tristan, it is important for him to visit it regularly and use it to help work out his next learning steps. He can work on his iExplore projects at school and at home and should be inspired to follow each through to conclusion that he can be proud of.